Axel-D's commission thread [taking Loli's Curse IV ideas]

Case Scenario · 04-17-2010

How about this. A detective is searching the house looking for any sign of any one of the people who have disappeared there, having been sent by relatives or friends or what-have-you. His instincts tell him there's a lot to learn about this place. And that's his business, he monologues. "To learn things."
He realizes that the house seems far too tidy to be abandoned... for example, all the glass is in pristine condition. He shines his light into a darkened room which becomes illuminated, and he realizes that he's in a hall of mirrors. As he looks around he's astonished to find one mirror in particular which reflects him not as himself but as a cute goth schoolgirl with pigtails and chalk white skin. Her face is bespectacled, coquettish and eerily mask like. He moves his hand around, lifts his legs, tries to trip up whatever mechanism is behind this, but the image matches him move for move. He then fools around a little and strikes feminine poses, making the reflection fondle its chest and go all pouty. He decides to get back to work and figure out what's going on when he realizes that he can't stop... The reflection keeps posing and he's unable to control himself. In this fashion he begins to change into the diminutive lolita.
Finally, a stern voice calls out to him that it's time to return to her lessons. He turns towards the voice as though called to attention and faces the Demon maid, who is now apparently her tutor. She is guided to a small classroom, where it seems she's assumed the role of the Mistress' little sister. She objects of course, and attempts to argue back with customary gumshoe guff, but she can no longer remember why. In fact, she can barely remember anything. The demoness informs her that she is always forgetting everything she knows, and so must be continually schooled... We look behind her and see that this is because her face and hair are all that exists of her head, a hollow mask with literally nothing between her ears. As it is, all she can remember with consistency is that she is there to learn... forever, there is the insatiable, hopeless instinct telling her she's there to learn... something...

04-17-2010	#12
Case Scenario Frequent Poster Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 457	Re: Axel-D's commission thread [taking Loli's Curse IV ideas] How about this. A detective is searching the house looking for any sign of any one of the people who have disappeared there, having been sent by relatives or friends or what-have-you. His instincts tell him there's a lot to learn about this place. And that's his business, he monologues. "To learn things." He realizes that the house seems far too tidy to be abandoned... for example, all the glass is in pristine condition. He shines his light into a darkened room which becomes illuminated, and he realizes that he's in a hall of mirrors. As he looks around he's astonished to find one mirror in particular which reflects him not as himself but as a cute goth schoolgirl with pigtails and chalk white skin. Her face is bespectacled, coquettish and eerily mask like. He moves his hand around, lifts his legs, tries to trip up whatever mechanism is behind this, but the image matches him move for move. He then fools around a little and strikes feminine poses, making the reflection fondle its chest and go all pouty. He decides to get back to work and figure out what's going on when he realizes that he can't stop... The reflection keeps posing and he's unable to control himself. In this fashion he begins to change into the diminutive lolita. Finally, a stern voice calls out to him that it's time to return to her lessons. He turns towards the voice as though called to attention and faces the Demon maid, who is now apparently her tutor. She is guided to a small classroom, where it seems she's assumed the role of the Mistress' little sister. She objects of course, and attempts to argue back with customary gumshoe guff, but she can no longer remember why. In fact, she can barely remember anything. The demoness informs her that she is always forgetting everything she knows, and so must be continually schooled... We look behind her and see that this is because her face and hair are all that exists of her head, a hollow mask with literally nothing between her ears. As it is, all she can remember with consistency is that she is there to learn... forever, there is the insatiable, hopeless instinct telling her she's there to learn... something... Last edited by Case Scenario; 04-17-2010 at 12:40 AM.