Matt's BE Thread

[Blake Isaac Gordon]

Originally Posted by Lurking Guy

Read it.

The character interaction is incredibly awkward and unnatural. Might want to work on thinking of dialogue and ideas from a different perspective, and considering characters as people completely detached from yourself, drawing connections you want later.

I might say I sort of agree, but my issue is I lack zero understanding of the 'search for your Ego' reference. If the ego is explained in other parts of your work then I'll strike my criticism from this forum.

If not, what the heck is her Ego?