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Uneven Growth Sequence #7: Shiori Misaki
For my 7th (and last for a while) growth sequence, I bring you another one from Kojiro Highwind. This girl is a little younger than my last few girls, so for that we don't have ripping, I'm afraid. Still plenty of odd growth, though:
http://pensuke-kun.deviantart.com/ar...F12326112&qo=6 http://pensuke-kun.deviantart.com/ar...F12326112&qo=5 http://pensuke-kun.deviantart.com/ar...F12326112&qo=4 http://pensuke-kun.deviantart.com/ar...F12326112&qo=3 http://pensuke-kun.deviantart.com/ar...F12326112&qo=2 http://pensuke-kun.deviantart.com/ar...F12326112&qo=1 http://pensuke-kun.deviantart.com/ar...F12326112&qo=0 |
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07-13-2010
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Re: Uneven Growth Sequence #7: Shiori Misaki
Un-even growth seems to be attaching itself to me. Pensuke is probably to blame for that. :0
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Re: Uneven Growth Sequence #7: Shiori Misaki
While it is nicely drawn, I have to admit I have this feeling that it is somewhat pointless. I think it's because if you went from page 1 right to page 6 and 7, skipping the ones in between, you wouldn't even know she had grown. There is nothing to give a sense of scale. The clothes don't look different at all and her body seems exactly the same. That would be okay, if there was something else we could use to gauge her ending size with. The artwork is good and I am not trying to be mean, just giving my honest opinion.
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Re: Uneven Growth Sequence #7: Shiori Misaki
I agree well done, but in the end you can't tell she changed at all.
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Re: Uneven Growth Sequence #7: Shiori Misaki
The jacket in the first panel wrapped around her is wrapped around her neck in the final panel. It's just really hard to see in the sketch.
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Re: Uneven Growth Sequence #7: Shiori Misaki
You should have asked Kojiro to draw something in the background that would have helped gauge it. Even a lamp or something would have done.
Other than that, good series |
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07-13-2010
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Re: Uneven Growth Sequence #7: Shiori Misaki
She's outside in the snow, but yeah. A bush at least would've helped. I'll make note of that in future commissions.
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Re: Uneven Growth Sequence #7: Shiori Misaki
I'm not a huge uneven fan, but this was cute. I noticed the jacket/neck thing, lol, but that's probably just because I know Shiori and how she always has that shoulder shawl on. Always liked Shiori, though personally, I was always a huge Mai fan, but that's just cause I love the stoic, inwardly cute girls. Or Nayuki, lol.
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07-13-2010
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Join Date: Jan 2006
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Re: Uneven Growth Sequence #7: Shiori Misaki
No offense, but it did absolutely nothing for me
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07-14-2010
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Join Date: Mar 2006
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Re: Uneven Growth Sequence #7: Shiori Misaki
I liked it, thanks a lot for sharing it with us Silver Spoon.
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07-14-2010
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Process Master
Join Date: Apr 2006
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Re: Uneven Growth Sequence #7: Shiori Misaki
Very nice. This style of growth is definitely growing on me. (please pardon the pun)
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07-14-2010
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Tieing a Knot Or two
Join Date: Jan 2006
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Re: Uneven Growth Sequence #7: Shiori Misaki
Kojiro's Style is just so cute :3
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