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[blackshirtboy]

Pretty good, love the beginning of the transformation on the second page but I feel like it jumps too far ahead for the third page.
Thats just me though, thank you for the content!

[Damn_Lucky]

Originally Posted by blackshirtboy

Pretty good, love the beginning of the transformation on the second page but I feel like it jumps too far ahead for the third page.
Thats just me though, thank you for the content!

I kinda noticed that too. Started out nice and slow, but then kinda started speeding up. By the end the 2nd TF was a "poof"

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The pacing is abit bizarre.

[Dr. Otto]

Originally Posted by Damn_Lucky

I kinda noticed that too. Started out nice and slow, but then kinda started speeding up. By the end the 2nd TF was a "poof"

=/

The pacing is abit bizarre.

I only had so much money to commission so many pages.

[Damn_Lucky]

Originally Posted by Dr. Otto

I only had so much money to commission so many pages.

The pacing still could of been more consistent in all honesty.

[Dr. Otto]

Originally Posted by Damn_Lucky

The pacing still could of been more consistent in all honesty.

Here's an idea: Why don't you get in touch with the artist and commission a 5-page comic from him yourself, just to show me how it's done?

[Damn_Lucky]

Originally Posted by Dr. Otto

Here's an idea: Why don't you get in touch with the artist and commission a 5-page comic from him yourself, just to show me how it's done?

Thanks. Always great to know my status as a TG artist is well recognized.

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Maby instead of getting pissed off and defensive, realize it's constructive criticism.

[LordEbonFuze]

good and fun. wonky at parts. would have flowed more smoothly if it was just the kid into arcee(older generation). still XD felt kinda to silly when they grinded their metal boobies together XD made me laugh. and yeah for a 5 page comish it does seem kinda rushed