goo and slime girls TF discussion?

[sodacat]

This thread is the first I've seen of your work, and you do seem to have a better grasp on the subject than most other artists who attempt it. Both of the linked images would probably be improved if they were zoomed in a bit and had a bit more thought put into the focal point of the image. The girls in Slime TF also look really stiff, and if you didn't want to draw her genitals you probably should have expanded the transformed area to cover that. Just Barbie dolling it looks weird.

[Nyakuro]

Originally Posted by sodacat

This thread is the first I've seen of your work, and you do seem to have a better grasp on the subject than most other artists who attempt it. Both of the linked images would probably be improved if they were zoomed in a bit and had a bit more thought put into the focal point of the image. The girls in Slime TF also look really stiff, and if you didn't want to draw her genitals you probably should have expanded the transformed area to cover that. Just Barbie dolling it looks weird.

Yeah, well i did that because i didn't know at that moment that i could use the mosaic effect xD! So I've thought that it would have been better to leave them like that respecting dA policies, but i was wrong xD! That's why on the next one i didn't do the same . I'm still trying to understand perspective and vanishing points, reading books about it and practicing over and over again xD! I hope in some time I'll be able to create better compositions :P.

Originally Posted by nothingclever

Wow Nyakuro, that artwork is pretty fantastic. The one with the woman on the bed has amazing composition to it. Your use of shading and dynamic lighting effects really make the goo girls look crystalline, very nice.

Thanks! But they are pretty lame at this moment XD! I'm working on them and trying to make them look nicer, so probably next time they would be better, or at least that what i hope xD! ^_^.

[cdryad]

Originally Posted by Nyakuro

Thanks! But they are pretty lame at this moment XD!

Lies.

[Mazoku]

For those who don't follow Detached's 3D Custom Girl thread ( http://www.process-productions.com/f...=20044&page=57 )
he just did a Jellax vs Sailor Moon sequence here:
http://www.process-productions.com/f...postcount=1130