Sir, yes Sir! (Offsite)

Xodiac · 07-29-2011

Oh, it's not that awful. The face is more than a bit masculine, to be sure; smaller eyebrows, larger eyes, and maybe more hair would have helped a lot. As it is, it really does look like a guy in drag. Oh, the arms should probably be thinner, too - more amazon, less Schwartzenegger.

But the drawing quality is fine, the body is well done. It's just that the overall impression isn't quite female enough.

I give it a B, maybe B-.

07-29-2011	#6
Xodiac Process Fan Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 88	Re: Sir, yes Sir! Oh, it's not that awful. The face is more than a bit masculine, to be sure; smaller eyebrows, larger eyes, and maybe more hair would have helped a lot. As it is, it really does look like a guy in drag. Oh, the arms should probably be thinner, too - more amazon, less Schwartzenegger. But the drawing quality is fine, the body is well done. It's just that the overall impression isn't quite female enough. I give it a B, maybe B-.