A different take on the Shroomgirl (even-less-SFW)

[RandomAustralian]

First off, I'd like to apologise in advance if I've misinterpreted the extents of this forum's mission. Having read the rules I think this fits, but please don't hold it against me if I'm mistaken.

This is one of the pictures I tried to present with my request to join this forum, but I forgot that HF doesn't show the stranger subjects by default. I made it earlier this month, as a different take on the girl-into-mushroom transformations made by people like Naga.

[Craper]

That looks pretty good man. Like how you made the underside of her cap her hair.

[RandomAustralian]

I'm glad you like the concept, Craper.

I can't change the thread title, but I've got another TF pic done, just in time for Halloween.

[Craper]

Another interesting concept. The upside down face is a bit odd, but works if her neck was the stem I suppose.

You do need to do more shading though, as it all looks kinda flat at the moment. Just shade a bit and it'd look better.

[RandomAustralian]

It's a bad habit of mine. How about this, better?

[Craper]

Seems you made some of the shadows a bit larger. When I said shading, I was referring to the objects, like the pumpkins and the leg. The still look kinda flat. I've made a quick example, using your pumpkin picture so you can see.

Only did it to the one pumpkin, and it's rather messy, but hopefully get's the idea across. Best advice would be to look up reference pumpkin pictures, or what ever you are wanting to make, and look at how the shadows and shading lays on them.