New TF Story

oxdaman · 10-16-2012

Hey there Orange! I finally figured out how to navigate the forum (I'm not that bright I know) Now I get to finally give comments on the rest of your stories! Although it feels weird writing them like this when everything is here already lol. Oh well, I'll just comment as I finish each chapter.

So I just read chapter 10 (I think). The question that's probably going to go through my head as I read the rest of the chapters until it's answer is "how long until the army shows up?" Anyway, my biggest surprise is what happened to Mary after the last chapter. I honestly thought that she was going to barricade herself in the apartment with the car. Didn't think that she'd EAT the car and everything else. What's more, she started forgetting what she looked like? I can't even begin to say how bad a sign that is. And though her plan to make the police flee without hurting anyone worked, either way the army is bound to show up at some point.

One has to wonder how long Katie will stick with Mary. More importantly, how will this all end for Mary? In a test tube? 6 feet under? (Wait, that'd be bad). A happy ending doesn't appear to be in site right now.

Great chapter! Can't wait to read the rest!

oxdaman · 10-16-2012

Chapter 13 and on a roll!!

I chuckled a bit with the "Have a nice day," that the phone operator robotically said. Who calls the CDC if they're having a nice day? And the person who said "I can't have the place quarantined unless-" Unless what, people die? A little late for that don't ya think?

I really feel for Mary though. The CDC is pretty much her last hope. Otherwise it's either off to Area 51 in a test tube or The end of the Body, the Flesh, and her.

On to the next one!

oxdaman · 10-16-2012

Huh, didn't realize that it'd been well over a year since you lasted updated Mary's Story. Well I can't say much because not a lot has happened, but one thing that I did enjoy was the lighten mood. Can't be serious all the time right? Really loved the cracks about boobzilla mark 2. XD

Can't wait till the next chapter of this comes out. I'm going to hunt for Working Girl and Sid and the Girls and any other stories. Not the best at searching through forums and they're not exactly storied titled here. Actually found a thread post started by someone else about Juggalos. I won't delve deeply into that. I'll just enjoy the story and say what I think.

Now then, come along Wattson! We'll hunt those stories down!

10-16-2012	#1
oxdaman Perverted Rock Join Date: May 2012 Posts: 41	Re: New TF Story Hey there Orange! I finally figured out how to navigate the forum (I'm not that bright I know) Now I get to finally give comments on the rest of your stories! Although it feels weird writing them like this when everything is here already lol. Oh well, I'll just comment as I finish each chapter. So I just read chapter 10 (I think). The question that's probably going to go through my head as I read the rest of the chapters until it's answer is "how long until the army shows up?" Anyway, my biggest surprise is what happened to Mary after the last chapter. I honestly thought that she was going to barricade herself in the apartment with the car. Didn't think that she'd EAT the car and everything else. What's more, she started forgetting what she looked like? I can't even begin to say how bad a sign that is. And though her plan to make the police flee without hurting anyone worked, either way the army is bound to show up at some point. One has to wonder how long Katie will stick with Mary. More importantly, how will this all end for Mary? In a test tube? 6 feet under? (Wait, that'd be bad). A happy ending doesn't appear to be in site right now. Great chapter! Can't wait to read the rest!

10-16-2012	#2
oxdaman Perverted Rock Join Date: May 2012 Posts: 41	Re: New TF Story Chapter 13 and on a roll!! I chuckled a bit with the "Have a nice day," that the phone operator robotically said. Who calls the CDC if they're having a nice day? And the person who said "I can't have the place quarantined unless-" Unless what, people die? A little late for that don't ya think? I really feel for Mary though. The CDC is pretty much her last hope. Otherwise it's either off to Area 51 in a test tube or The end of the Body, the Flesh, and her. On to the next one!

10-16-2012	#3
oxdaman Perverted Rock Join Date: May 2012 Posts: 41	Re: New TF Story Huh, didn't realize that it'd been well over a year since you lasted updated Mary's Story. Well I can't say much because not a lot has happened, but one thing that I did enjoy was the lighten mood. Can't be serious all the time right? Really loved the cracks about boobzilla mark 2. XD Can't wait till the next chapter of this comes out. I'm going to hunt for Working Girl and Sid and the Girls and any other stories. Not the best at searching through forums and they're not exactly storied titled here. Actually found a thread post started by someone else about Juggalos. I won't delve deeply into that. I'll just enjoy the story and say what I think. Now then, come along Wattson! We'll hunt those stories down!