TylorMade(TF)Clips

[shinchan1]

I hope they upload the horse one withought the futa. Horse tfs and caroline peirce are a fave of mine, lol

[GenYun]

Is the Holly one not a donkey TF? I thought I read that somewhere on the forums.

[shinchan1]

Originally Posted by GenYun

Is the Holly one not a donkey TF? I thought I read that somewhere on the forums.

Im assuming its a mouse since she has whiskers in the preview image.

[aresx]

Originally Posted by shinchan1

I hope they upload the horse one withought the futa. Horse tfs and caroline peirce are a fave of mine, lol

yeah same here. they most likely will..they did the same with the dog futa that they did a while back

[shinchan1]

Originally Posted by aresx

yeah same here. they most likely will..they did the same with the dog futa that they did a while back

fingers crossed!!!!

[mysteryman29]

Okay GREAT news everyone!

The clip with Holly that was posted yesterday was NOT meant to be based on my script from the contest. This clip was simply a test clip so they could try out some new props & makeup with Holly. The mouse TF clip based on my script will be filmed next week with a GREAT new makeup artist involved as well! Very excited!

They have everything totally under control!

[Rei-Lin]

Hah, while posting about the mouse TF mysteryman posted it wasn't about his script. I thought it was until I reread your script and then I was going "ahh..hmmmm?" Anyway, there's only futa at the very, very end of the horse TF clip, literally the last 2 minutes or so. You could just stop the video after Caroline falls down onto all fours and you'd miss nothing. I guess I'll make a new post here in a minute and do my usual review of the clips for those wondering how they are and stuff like that.

[onallfours]

I eagerly await your review as I can only afford one!

[shinchan1]

Originally Posted by Rei-Lin

Hah, while posting about the mouse TF mysteryman posted it wasn't about his script. I thought it was until I reread your script and then I was going "ahh..hmmmm?" Anyway, there's only futa at the very, very end of the horse TF clip, literally the last 2 minutes or so. You could just stop the video after Caroline falls down onto all fours and you'd miss nothing. I guess I'll make a new post here in a minute and do my usual review of the clips for those wondering how they are and stuff like that.

do you plan on posting preview videos like the previous ones you made when you reviewed the others?

[Rei-Lin]

There's TWO new transformation videos posted on TMC. Let me give you a short lowdown on them here.
Mane `n Tail Price: $22.00 USD
After Caroline uses Mane `n Tail horse shampoo her hair is so improved she decides to take horse vitamin supplements with it and soon she begins to turn into a horse. Some issues during shooting.

and

Grandma`s Last Wish Price: $21.00 USD
Holly`s Grandmother leaves her a pink dress in her will but also insists that she must wear it to her funeral because it will make her a better person. Once she puts it on she begins to transform...


Okay first Mane 'n Tail. The first half of the video is all set up and Caroline does a very good job as she always has in setting up the oncoming transformation. We even get to see her running around outside jogging and that helps get away from that whole feeling of all these clips being done just in a room/apartment sort of setting, it's a nice little touch that we don't see that often. During the transformation parts, Caroline's feet turn into giant hooves, and they show her foot sort of changing inside her slippers, which is done rather well. Caroline's acting shows off just how much it hurts to have your feet turn into hooves. They also change at different times which is interesting. Her fingernails get really screwed up a little after this, but her hands do not change into hooves, they only turn sort of dark tanned and leathery looking. Her ass expands and she grows a horse tail. The tail growth was actually fairly well done as it cascades down over her ass cheeks as individual strands first, and then more and more flow down afterwards to cover those. That was probably my favorite part. After this, her other foot changes into a hoof, she grows horse-like ears and finally a muzzle. The muzzle growth is done in a nice way with her hands held up close to her face at the start, then sound effects kick in and she slowly pulls her hands away from her face as though her muzzle is pushing her hands outwards away from her face. It's an easy way to do that effect and it worked out well.

So overall I think this clip is well done but for the nitpicky ass in me, here's what I would have liked to have seen. Caroline complains during the transformation that her eyes are burning, but the only thing that changes (that I can tell) is her eyelashes grow really long. What I would have done was bought a pair of contacts that were big and brown or black and used those to show her eyes changing into those like a horse. I've sent Bud a few websites that sell tons of contact lenses for everything from normal eye ware to Halloween costumes, so I know they could get them to fit the animal they're showing. It's not a huge deal, and it may have been that Caroline didn't want to use contacts (if they had them), but for future animal transformations, I'd really like to see the eyes change, especially because I like the idea of them mentioning their eyes are burning or hurting as the transformation moves along. Next I'd have show those hooves busting through the shoes a bit more. As it is it's fine of course, but it's a before and after situation. Perhaps the prop wouldn't let it work that way, but those slippers could have been pre weakened possibly to just show the hoof busting out of the ends or something. A few more horse sounds would have been good to use too, especially as something that was happening "behind her voice". Like as she spoke you'd hear a horse-like sound behind it. Caroline makes a few of her own sounds but a few scattered real horse sounds soon after she grew her tail would have been cool as well. Or even as it all started, the voice and the neighs could have started just before everything else, like this impending doom of transformation. Since Caroline was wearing long sleeves, as she fell down to all fours, I would have added just a little bit of horse hair growing out from under the sleeves to cover up her hands a bit, kind of like a horse has. It wouldn't have been too hard I'm sure, and may have added that little extra fine touch to the transformation. Finally, the teeth I would have tried to have used bigger blocky teeth as horse teeth are big and square. Of course this may have been Caroline not wanting to wear big teeth or something but I would have tried to find some fake horse teeth or something a bit like horse teeth to add to the effect of what they have in the video. They have some sort of fake teeth in there, but they sort of colored them that add yellow as if they're just dirty and grimy.

I'll mention here that there's nothing wrong with the video as it is. It's a very well done transformation and has great acting with Caroline. All I'm suggesting are a few ideas of things to think about for future transformations, as these suggestions could be put to use in any transformation and are well within the budget and capabilities of TMC, at least in my opinion. At the end I'll tell you that the futa at the very end of the video is done okay, the big difference is that the prop is an actual horse penis prop, not just the usual ones we've seen before. It's not as HUGE as a real horse penis but that's the limitations of the prop and not TMC's fault. I would have loved to have seen more to the growth and some pants rippage going on, but since futa wasn't the focus of the video, as it is, I can't really complain. If you don't like futa though, stop the video after Caroline goes down onto all fours. You won't miss anything after that.

Overall I gotta say that TMC is getting better at the transformation stuff and just has to start ironing out small details here and there. I'd give the clip a 9.0 out of 10 and ask anybody to add it to their collections if they want to support TMC's future endeavors of transformation.

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Next Grandma's Last Wish. This is a strange clip but now that I know it's a setup clip to sorting things out for doing mysterman's script idea, I can take it easier on this one. Okay, it's Holly and we get some setup at the start with her putting on the pretty pink dress. So we get to see some Holly bum, and that's always a nice thing to see! =) Okay so things start getting strange after she gets all dressed up. She gets really sweaty and then her forearms become sort of slimy and pink, like she has a rash on her arms that is oozing some sticky stuff. It's rather weird to me but things go more strange as her eyes change and go all cat like (it's the same contacts as in previous videos). Holly starts to freak out a bit and then her breasts expand to which Holly freaks out more and worries that they will explode. She convulses and almost goes into a weird fit or angry tantrum on the bed and then grows a tail. She ends up playing with it but soon after her hair grows longer and turns pink! She looks in the mirror and is completely confused about what is happening to her when suddenly her nails become bright pink. Finally the last of the transformation is that she grows whiskers and mouse ears and being to make "meep, squeak, squeak!" noises almost uncontrollably as she tries to speak. The clip ends with her squeaking and crawling around on the floor unable to stand.

Okay, this is the oddest bit of transformation I've seen. I love Holly, she puts on such a great show here but I do have some troubles with this thing. I understand this is sort of like the tryouts for mysteryman's script idea, so a lot of what is going on here is a first time out trial. With that in mind, there's still some stuff here that I'd like to address. First, the tail is a lion tail, it's not a mouse or a rat tail. I know it works for the clip because TMC didn't state this clip was Holly turning into a mouse. So it's hard to knock it when you think of it in that regard. I would have just cut the fuzzy end off and re-sewn it together to make it a pointy tail. The slimy pink arm stuff at the start didn't make much sense, and I'd almost wonder if Holly's confusion at it was her real confusion at the stuff too. I'm sure there's more going on there, but I get the idea that her skin was supposed to be turning pink and not just a small section of her arm and the slimey stuff was sort of like a secretion that was happening as her skin texture changed. I wouldn't mind any of it, but I think they should have colored the rest of her skin pink, at least the parts we could see such as her neck, face and some of her back. Maybe having the pink slowly covering her skin as the scene went on would have been an idea? As it is, it seems like an unfinished idea. Next item is that outside of the whiskers, Holly's face never changes. No weird teeth, no slight muzzle, no fur, nadda. Maybe they didn't have the props yet or they're waiting for a better make-up artist or perhaps Holly didn't feel like getting stuff put on her face. It's not a bad thing in and of itself, as I said, but after how well the horse muzzle worked out, I'm surprised something wasn't done similar to that in this clip. I'll also say that the cat eye contacts, while adding a very eerie feeling to Holly herself, are not the right ones for the animal. Since I already suggested in the review of the Horse transformation that TMC invest in contacts that match the animal, I won't dwell more on them here.

Overall the clip is strange but interesting at the same time. Knowing it's sort of a jumping off point for TMC's future transformations regarding mysterman's script, it's hard to knock the clip's weaknesses since it was used more for an experimental piece. However, for the price, there's not that much process in this clip compared to any of the other transformation clips TMC has done. So if you can only get this clip or the horse clip, I'd pick the horse. I myself will always buy all the transformation clips and so to with these. The clip itself is still well made and Holly is as good in the acting department as ever. The props and process that happens is done in the usual TMC flair and the weirdness is actually a plus, since it's such a strange departure from any of TMC's other clips. It's unique and that's always worth something. I'd give the clip an 7.5 out of 10. It's worth buying to support TMC's future transformation videos but it's not a clip you need to rush out and buy before picking up the horse transformation in my opinion.

[MeMyselfI]

Are there any preview clips?

Interesting in purchasing, but not without some sort of visual indication of what it is...

[mysteryman29]

Rei-Lin, thanks for the excellent rundown on the new clips! As you mentioned, I think these are proof that TMC are trying very hard to make the clips good and to continue raising the bar in every facet - acting, makeup, effects, etc. The fact that Taylor shot a test clip with Holly before tackling the video based on my script just shows their strive to get it right and to do everyone's scripts justice.

As a fan, this is incredibly appreciated and I look forward to continuing to support their efforts! I see a TON of potential in the images of the horse clip alone and cannot wait to see it in its entirety. There have clearly been great strides made by adding good prosthetics and I can only imagine how things will only get better with a good makeup artist involved.

Thanks for your reviews!