Finally launched my BE comics website

[gaou nox]

The content provided is rather meh.

[JJBX]

You know I'm with you Jbird. I read the Tales of Camp BE...and while I liked the artwork...I'm really confused about the plot...was it out of order? I don't get it. Pretty girls though...

[Heir]

Hi guys. Writer and Editor for Expansionfan here. Appreciate all feedback you guys can give us about the site and the comics. Any specifics about what our current catalog might be lacking, or what we should do more of next, please let us know more. We want this website to be brimming with breast expansion fantasies, and any input that the community can offer us in order to get there, we'd be hugely grateful for your input. We've got some pretty exciting expansion comics in the pipeline which we really hope you guys are going to love.

Concerning Camp BE's plot:

*SPOILER*

The "spring water" coming from the springs near the camp causes the girls to grow. The cause of growth was left a little ambiguous to be better explained in a second issue, but that's why our heroine's chest starts growing after she drinks and is splashed by the water. When she wakes up the morning after, all seems normal at first, until she once again struggles to contain her randomly swelling breasts.

Any more queries, ask away and I'll do my best to answer!

[JBird]

That was easy enough to figure out, but my main issues were the flow of the story and the art. Most of the dialogue balloons appeared out of place, as well as the dialogue itself, which made little to no sense within context. As for the art, just about all of the characters were so poorly posed that it took me out of it completely. And paneling only added to the confusion as to the story's flow.

The thing about sequential art is that it has to flow in a certain way so that the reader can follow what is happening. And don't take that as to mean professional, mainstream comic books are perfect in that regard, because I have seen a lot of recent books suffer from the same mistakes as Camp BE.

Look up some comics by Will Eisner, and you can see what I mean by how the story flows in sequential art.

[Valeyard Vince]

Out of curiosity, is BE Camp the only comic anyone has trouble following, or is this a reoccurring problem in the expansion-fan selection?

[JBird]

Cash or Bust is the only other one that has issues, although not quite as problematic as Camp BE.

[Heir]

Apologies for any problems you had with reading Cash Or Bust. We had to cut the final page just before launch due to a minor technicality with the terms and conditions, hence the ending is a bit abrupt. There was meant to be one more page with much more of a conclusion to the story. But hopefully there was enough action and sexiness in the comic for you guys to enjoy regardless.

[JBird]

Like I said, Cash or Bust isn't as problematic as Camp BE. I honestly do not want to discourage you from creating more content.

[Heir]

Thanks for the honest feedback. We'll keep trying our best to make sure you guys are satisfied with all the comics you're getting. There's plenty more coming up in the future catalog that I hope you guys are going to enjoy.