Missa - TF

Mr. Nibz · 08-29-2013

Hi Missa,

Just bought and watched the cat and new wolf TF. I enjoyed them and appreciate the effort and love you've put into these. They're not quite succeeding is suspending my disbelief yet but you got close with the wolf one in places.

Couple of things you might want to think about.

-Quicker cuts. Several times in the video you go through a heavy panting scene, then sort of cut it off, give the camera a look and scamper into a different position. It breaks the tension. Probably want to cut directly to the new position.

-Blending makeup: The muzzle was pretty cool but the spot where its glued to your face was obvious. Thats something I know can be fixed.

-Reaction shots: If you want to a break in the painful gasping or bone breaking. Try having your character gain a momentary awareness of what's happening to her. A No no no! or please stop! might allow you to reposition yourself without being obvious.

-Things to explore, I know we're big into fur growth. Look into using something called crepe hair. Its what the proffessionals use for fake beards and other humanish hair.

Keep going!

08-29-2013	#1
Mr. Nibz Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 103	Re: Missa - TF Hi Missa, Just bought and watched the cat and new wolf TF. I enjoyed them and appreciate the effort and love you've put into these. They're not quite succeeding is suspending my disbelief yet but you got close with the wolf one in places. Couple of things you might want to think about. -Quicker cuts. Several times in the video you go through a heavy panting scene, then sort of cut it off, give the camera a look and scamper into a different position. It breaks the tension. Probably want to cut directly to the new position. -Blending makeup: The muzzle was pretty cool but the spot where its glued to your face was obvious. Thats something I know can be fixed. -Reaction shots: If you want to a break in the painful gasping or bone breaking. Try having your character gain a momentary awareness of what's happening to her. A No no no! or please stop! might allow you to reposition yourself without being obvious. -Things to explore, I know we're big into fur growth. Look into using something called crepe hair. Its what the proffessionals use for fake beards and other humanish hair. Keep going!