My Girlfriend is the She-Hulk (Writing)

[CuddleBeam]

Originally Posted by Conker

Hey there, guys. I've decided to create my own piece of fiction. Right now I have Part 1 finished on writing.com, and I plan on creating part 2 soon. Tell me what you think so far.
Here is the link:
http://www.writing.com/main/view_ite...he-Hulk-Part-1
I wanted to create the writing in the "choose your own story" style, but you need to pay a membership for that. I wonder if there are any other websites I can use.
By the way, don't worry if you felt this part doesn't have a whole lot of action. Part 2 will have more exciting parts.

If you're going for "choose your own story", I volunteer to code it into a Visual Novel game (if you're interested) for you if you get someone else to do the art. Backrounds/music wouldn't be needed, I can cover that for you, just character art would be needed.

I hope you write more!

[Conker]

Originally Posted by CuddleBeam

If you're going for "choose your own story", I volunteer to code it into a Visual Novel game (if you're interested) for you if you get someone else to do the art. Backrounds/music wouldn't be needed, I can cover that for you, just characters would be needed.

I hope you write more!

Thank you for the offer but I want to have at least part 2 finished before I even start thinking about something like that. Although that would be pretty nice to see.
What did you think of the piece? Was there anything you think that could have been done better? I literally have no idea what I am doing, so any constructive criticism would help.

[bacattack]

Originally Posted by CuddleBeam

If you're going for "choose your own story", I volunteer to code it into a Visual Novel game (if you're interested) for you if you get someone else to do the art. Backrounds/music wouldn't be needed, I can cover that for you, just character art would be needed.

I hope you write more!

Well, the thing is that if you wanted to make a Visual Novel game there'd have to be alternate love interests. It would be interesting, a VN based on a high school (or college) with young versions of Marvel heroines and you trying to win their hearts. :3

[Conker]

Originally Posted by bacattack

Well, the thing is that if you wanted to make a Visual Novel game there'd have to be alternate love interests. It would be interesting, a VN based on a high school (or college) with young versions of Marvel heroines and you trying to win their hearts. :3

Meh, I wouldn't go for heroines, I'd rather go for making it where you choose between girls that can grow taller, turn muscular, or turn into a werewolf or something.
So you can choose between 3 types of women, basically.
Regardless, I've been working on Part 2 and I have to say that these writings tend to get longer than I thought.