New Short Story: Control

[Robopengy]

Honestly I think this is good enough of just a story that if you cleaned up some of the language (like tits :P) you could probably submit this to a publication.

[robclassact]

Originally Posted by Robopengy

Honestly I think this is good enough of just a story that if you cleaned up some of the language (like tits :P) you could probably submit this to a publication.

Thanks! I'd probably try to keep at least one "tits" in there. I tend to go overboard with that word, since it is awfully fun to use ;-)

[Robopengy]

Originally Posted by robclassact

Thanks! I'd probably try to keep at least one "tits" in there. I tend to go overboard with that word, since it is awfully fun to use ;-)

I don't have a problem with it, but someone like the New Yorker might :P