New Comic - The Kiss

[Skalla-Grimm]

Originally Posted by poppert56

Art? Good! Cute? Meh, I guess. This mostly left me more confused than anything else.

Just your standard girl-becomes-aroused-and-masturbates-so-hard-she-turns-into-a-werewolf story. They're so cliche, right? The twist in this case, such as there is, is that unlike the cover's suggestion she isn't ferocious, she just wants to cuddle. Awwwww!

BTW, I welcome constructive criticism, so feel free to rip away! In particular please mention any pages/panels/etc. you find confusing so I know what isn't working. Since 1) I've been staring at this for months and months and 2) my scripting method was "wing it" it's easily possible that something that seems obvious to me makes less sense to fresh eyes.