A Tight Fit by Willgottengains[A TG Story]

Scorch · 03-31-2014

It doesn't read very well, it's probablys just me, but I have a trouble trying to read things that are not paragraphed well. Try adding in paragraphs and it'll read better.

DangerousCharles · 04-03-2014

Well I certainly enjoyed that! Do keep writing, I'd love to see where this goes.

03-31-2014	#1
Scorch Process Master Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 742	Re: A Tight Fit by Willgottengains[A TG Story] It doesn't read very well, it's probablys just me, but I have a trouble trying to read things that are not paragraphed well. Try adding in paragraphs and it'll read better. __________________ Torn-City - Massively multiplayer online text based RPG

04-03-2014	#2
DangerousCharles Wannabe Superhero Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Bristol, UK Posts: 60	Re: A Tight Fit by Willgottengains[A TG Story] Well I certainly enjoyed that! Do keep writing, I'd love to see where this goes. __________________ Believing I had supernatural powers, I slammed into a brick wall.