Angela's first day (My new series.)

[Captain Ash]

Originally Posted by Kevin_Generic

Thanks, glad you like the clothing effects. And can you be a little but more specific on what it is about the expressions you think need more work?

Page 1 &2 are good!
Page 2 where the shrinking starts she has the face expression between "noticed that she is shrinking" and worrying.
So far so good!

Page 3 ,however, has just the "okay, I'm shrinking" face expression.
Someone who is shrinking and who never experienced something like that before, should be worried, confused, puzzled, or a a mix of all these feelings.
She knows its happening but know that she can't do anything about it.
Or she is not capable to understand the situation.

At page 3 bottom pic, her eyes are shut.
For me it looks like that she is pissed off rather than being embarrassed.

These are my suggestions what could be improved.
Hope it was helpful.

Greetings

Captain Ash