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Process Fan
Join Date: Jan 2006
Posts: 76
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Re: My first try at a story: Internet Shopping - Part 1
I enjoyed it. I think my only comments would be it seemed a bit rushed and I wish it was a bit longer.
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breast, expansion, gender, internet, shopping |
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