TG/BE Story: A Friendly Game

CNash · 06-22-2014

Awesome story! I'd definitely like to see more "games" in this setting - maybe Julie could find someone who'd turn the tables on her a little? It seems like Julie enjoys being the one "in control" - even though she gives the illusion of control to Mitch, she's still the one driving the scenario.

Also, a small typo / missing word: "his next comment came out in a much register."

06-22-2014	#5
CNash What would you rather be? Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 714	Re: TG/BE Story: A Friendly Game Awesome story! I'd definitely like to see more "games" in this setting - maybe Julie could find someone who'd turn the tables on her a little? It seems like Julie enjoys being the one "in control" - even though she gives the illusion of control to Mitch, she's still the one driving the scenario. Also, a small typo / missing word: "his next comment came out in a much register." __________________ "And the Lord said, 'Come forth and receive eternal life.' But John came fifth and won a toaster." Avatar by Geckz