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06-29-2014
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Mad Scientist
Join Date: May 2005
Location: Upstate NY
Posts: 371
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Re: Story: Please.. NSFW
Very descriptive and well paced. A few grammatical tidbits, but editing will catch that later. The mind games make it even better ;-)
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06-30-2014
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Lurker
Join Date: Jan 2006
Posts: 29
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Re: Story: Please.. NSFW
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<sigh> seems like no matter how many times I reread the thing I still manage to miss some grammar or spellig error. More to come, but I'm working on filling in gals between what I have written so far. I will try to post part three when I have a chance. |
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07-01-2014
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Lurker
Join Date: Jan 2006
Posts: 29
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Re: Story: Please.. NSFW
Here is a third installment. Our heroine seems to have met her match, but the battle is far from over. We return now as her valiant battle continues to ensue.
Last edited by ckent45; 07-01-2014 at 08:23 PM. Reason: correct file |
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07-13-2014
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Lurker
Join Date: Jan 2006
Posts: 29
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Re: Story: Please.. NSFW
In case anyone is still interested, here is more to the story. Taking a break here from the heat of the moment of the previous parts.
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08-03-2014
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Lurker
Join Date: Jan 2006
Posts: 29
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Re: Story: Please.. NSFW
No feedback, not sure if anyone is still interested, but here is some more.
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