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The Incorrigible Author
Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: Richmond, Virginia
Posts: 581
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Re: Yard Work Part Eleven
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But I only have one thought about this story. The brother seems very pervy considering he watches the process. I'm just saying it made me a little uncomfortable to see this college age kid. The art seemed a little odd for the girls as well, like in some parts it was rushed. But I did love the facial changes for the little girls.
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