New EBook: "Scale Model"

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It's possible that it slipped my mind a bit while writing this one. I'm usually a bit better at descriptions and stuff. I certainly feel like I did a fairly good job of it in Interview, for instance.

Truth be told, it took me a very long time to actually finish this one; I kept picking it up, writing a little bit, and putting it back down. I don't think I was bringing my "A" game, for whatever reason. It's entirely possible that details I'd usually cover may have escaped my notice. Don't get me wrong, I don't think it's bad or I wouldn't have released it. I just feel like I've done better.

As for the nondescript labels...that was on purpose, because I figured most people reading this story wouldn't care very much about what the gallery patrons looked like, ya know? lol

EDIT: Having gone back over the story...

She flicked her eyes up and down Paige’s body, taking in the chunky platform heels, the sheer black hosiery and garters, the tight black miniskirt, the black-and-silver bustier, the studded black leather collar, and the elegantly coiffed, jet-black curls of her hair, done up in a fifties-style bouffant.

That, plus at least the suggestion Paige is busty, is about all there is. I actually remember why this happened now - I was basing her image on a picture that my patron sent to me. It's one of those "I have a clear picture in my head and don't realize it's not on the page" things. Something I usually catch, or a beta reader catches for me...