"Bowling" SW Edition

[Anotherfetishguy]

Originally Posted by qzar9999

You know, it's not that I don't appreciate people making an effort to contribute. I do.

But have you considered maybe writing your own thing, rather than just doing a find and replace on an existing story? Just saying.

Its not that I don't want too, its that I cannot write stories like these for shit.

[Janus Steel]

Originally Posted by Anotherfetishguy

Its not that I don't want too, its that I cannot write stories like these for shit.

Honestly... go read my first published novel True Blue Alien: Digital Memories. It's pretty terrible. Then go read A Goddess's Gifts or Altered Realities and see how much I've improved.

Art, whether painting or writing or drawing or music, takes practice.

I love to do photo manipulations when I have time, but writing is my go to. TBA took me about a year to write, it's Y.A., and it shows. When you compare it to AGG or AR they took longer and they're more polished because by that point I'd written enough to get more familiar with a line of work.

What helped was doing little short stories for folks or just writing for fun. I have a huge volume of breast expansion and penis expansion and age regression stories that will NEVER see the light of day because they're just god awful. But I wrote daily and it made me better.

I'm sure once you get started and start really getting into it it'll be awesome.

[qzar9999]

Originally Posted by Janus Steel

Art, whether painting or writing or drawing or music, takes practice.

QFMFT!

Guy, you "can't write" because you *don't* write. You think my first story was anywhere near as good as the stuff people pay me to write now?

The only way you'll ever BE able to write good stories is if you get there by honing your skills.

[OhZone]

Originally Posted by qzar9999

QFMFT!

Guy, you "can't write" because you *don't* write. You think my first story was anywhere near as good as the stuff people pay me to write now?

The only way you'll ever BE able to write good stories is if you get there by honing your skills.

Yeah, very true, and your LMP is pretty brilliant.

But your early writing is pretty good too.

[scidram]

Originally Posted by OhZone

Yeah, very true, and your LMP is pretty brilliant.

But your early writing is pretty good too.

Been waiting for him to get back to work on LMP. It'll be huge! (or little)