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08-07-2018
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Zone of Darkness
Join Date: Jul 2008
Posts: 5,454
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Re: Changed: The Mirror (Comic)
The transformation is really good, but I was a little bugged by how the protagonist narrated every single detail. Sometimes you need to reel back on the inner monologue and let the visuals speak for themselves.
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