Lost story - reciprocal BE and SM

Phil Anasteema · 05-22-2009

So, I hope that "what is this story?" posts are not frowned upon too much here.

I lost a download of a BE story, but I forgot where I got it from and who the author is. I believe the story has enough unique elements to be identified, but entering the logical search words in the site search gave no good matches. I'm not even sure I found it here!

Basic hook of the story - by magical means, a couple find themselves in a reciprocal exchange of body mass. Her breasts grow as his whole body shrinks. Surgery cannot permanently reduce the size of her breasts, they just rapidly grow back to the size that matches his loss of volume.

BE is slow and ongoing over the course of weeks, as is his shrinking.

Another plot element - he tries to hide his loss of height at work, but a femal coworker finally notices and confronts him, with implications that she will be dominating him.

From my poor memory of the author's intro, he stated that this is one of his first BE stories. He only had the first chapter of the story finished and online.

Sound familiar?

draven · 05-22-2009

I'm a lurker, and I make no bones about it. So, please take my suggestion in the friendliest way possible, for I have no desire to upset anyone. The request thread is built precisely for this type of suggestion and you would probably receive a quicker response there than anywhere else. It's for all of us!

Now I shall return to my shadowy corner...

PyroWildcat · 05-22-2009

Sounds like the storyline of most of Greapos' stories. I haven't really read them myself in some time, so I'm not sure which of them is exactly what you're looking for.

dsojourn · 05-22-2009

If it wasn't for the fact that you say it was only for a chapter or so, I'd say it was a long, long, novel-length story written back on the GTS-Magic forums called "Fair Exchange". It was a by-the-book shrinking story with exactly the same basic plot you described, except it went on forever, at least 2 years worth of writing. The actual quality of the writing was quite good, but it was an insanely depressing SM story that was about nothing more than sadistically shitting up the main character's life as much as possible.

Phil Anasteema · 05-22-2009

Quote:

Originally Posted by dsojourn

If it wasn't for the fact that you say it was only for a chapter or so, I'd say it was a long, long, novel-length story written back on the GTS-Magic forums called "Fair Exchange". ... The actual quality of the writing was quite good, but it was an insanely depressing SM story...

Thanks for the title! I did some searching and found it:

"Fair Exchange" by Vincente

Weird, I found a copy that has everything up to and including Chapter 5. Taking a quick look at the remaining chapters, I see what you mean by depressing. Probably why Vincente never finished it - he wrote himself into a corner. If I download it again, I'll probably edit out the depressing stuff.

Thanks for indulging me by the replies! I'm new here, and I thought the Request threads were for posting requests for new material to be made to-order.

dsojourn · 05-23-2009

I'm telling you, he did finish it and it went on for a heck of a lot more then 5 chapters, I seem to recall at least 17-20, if not more, and it had a concrete, solid ending. It's from a few years back, though, so finding a complete copy might be hard. I certainly didn't save one, with the malicious nature of the tale.

05-22-2009	#1
Phil Anasteema Modest egomaniac Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 3	Lost story - reciprocal BE and SM So, I hope that "what is this story?" posts are not frowned upon too much here. I lost a download of a BE story, but I forgot where I got it from and who the author is. I believe the story has enough unique elements to be identified, but entering the logical search words in the site search gave no good matches. I'm not even sure I found it here! Basic hook of the story - by magical means, a couple find themselves in a reciprocal exchange of body mass. Her breasts grow as his whole body shrinks. Surgery cannot permanently reduce the size of her breasts, they just rapidly grow back to the size that matches his loss of volume. BE is slow and ongoing over the course of weeks, as is his shrinking. Another plot element - he tries to hide his loss of height at work, but a femal coworker finally notices and confronts him, with implications that she will be dominating him. From my poor memory of the author's intro, he stated that this is one of his first BE stories. He only had the first chapter of the story finished and online. Sound familiar?

05-22-2009	#2
draven Reluctant Poster Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: AZ Posts: 11	Re: Lost story - reciprocal BE and SM I'm a lurker, and I make no bones about it. So, please take my suggestion in the friendliest way possible, for I have no desire to upset anyone. The request thread is built precisely for this type of suggestion and you would probably receive a quicker response there than anywhere else. It's for all of us! Now I shall return to my shadowy corner...

05-22-2009	#3
PyroWildcat Perverted Skeleton Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 1,041	Re: Lost story - reciprocal BE and SM Sounds like the storyline of most of Greapos' stories. I haven't really read them myself in some time, so I'm not sure which of them is exactly what you're looking for.

05-22-2009	#4
dsojourn Frequent Poster Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 432	Re: Lost story - reciprocal BE and SM If it wasn't for the fact that you say it was only for a chapter or so, I'd say it was a long, long, novel-length story written back on the GTS-Magic forums called "Fair Exchange". It was a by-the-book shrinking story with exactly the same basic plot you described, except it went on forever, at least 2 years worth of writing. The actual quality of the writing was quite good, but it was an insanely depressing SM story that was about nothing more than sadistically shitting up the main character's life as much as possible.

05-23-2009	#6
dsojourn Frequent Poster Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 432	Re: Lost story - reciprocal BE and SM I'm telling you, he did finish it and it went on for a heck of a lot more then 5 chapters, I seem to recall at least 17-20, if not more, and it had a concrete, solid ending. It's from a few years back, though, so finding a complete copy might be hard. I certainly didn't save one, with the malicious nature of the tale.